*Sally jumped from activity to activity with my brothers, keeping them endlessly entertained and paying as little attention to me as though I were invisible.*
9: Sally entertained my brothers as though I were invisible.
7: Sally entertained brothers and I was invisible.
5: Brothers entertained, I was invisible.
3: Invisible, brothers entertained.
1: Invisible.
*But it is to say that I made each and every babysitter prove themselves, not directly, but until they gained my trust and respect they had no purchase to my obedience.*
9: I made every babysitter prove themselves for my respect.
7: Every babysitter proved themselves for my respect.
5: Babysitters proved for my respect.
3: Respectful of tested.
1: Test.
*One of my greatest weaknesses is how closely I protect my affection for people; and how incredibly backward it is.*
9: My backward weakness is protecting my affection of people.
7: Weakness of protecting my affection of people.
5: I protect my people affection.
3: Protecting my affection.
1. Backward.
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